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| VampireKizu, 11 Aug 2006 07:15 pm | |
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O.O;; |
| Aenith, 11 Aug 2006 09:53 pm | |
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Up Next: the end or maybe the begining Confused? I would really appreciate critiques, especially if you are unable to follow the story line. I write short comics, so unfortunately the next page is the last page. If you like my style don't worry I have many other comics that I am planning on uploading in the future. Also, if you have any ideas of how to continue this comic don't hesitate to tell me. Oh, and read the news page if you want to know the story of how this comic came to be. |
| MetraWorley, 08 Sep 2006 10:33 pm | |
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Naan! Mmm...garlic naan! Quite humorous so far. Some of the descriptions (i.e. "white as a sheet") are a bit distracting. Cute idea so far. |
| Aenith, 09 Sep 2006 01:24 pm | |
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To MetraWorley Thanks for the comment; I really appreciate your input. I enjoy constructive criticism! I will make a note of the descriptions, and try to avoid that in future comics. |
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